Caiti (primadonna5) wrote in theworldapart,
Caiti
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Another story up for comment

The Troubled Sky

Here is a story I started a year ago...I haven't touched it since. It works well as a short story however, I'd like to use what I have as the preface for a much larger story. Any comment is welcome! Thank you!

-C

P.S. This link should lead you straight to the story itself. If you like what the first page shows, click at the bottom to continue to the rest of the story. Thanks!

http://stickyourneckout.com/fiction/fiction43.htm
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